A little horror story

In class we are doing a lot of things about horror. We have a project: do a horror film, well a part of a horror film wherefore the other day I was thinking about vocabulary of horror. And I start to write small storys. When I start I remember the shortfilm of "Thriller" by Michael Jackson, that shortfilm have a lot of concepts of a horror ambience. So I read the lyrics and I underlined the scary words from the song. With this words I wrote a little horror story.

She was running in the street at the midnight, there was no one. She didn't know who was following her. Probably strange creatures or grisly ghouls? She didn't know, she didn't know anything only one thing: she had to fight for her life. She arrived at a house, an abandoned house. When she entered she felt a chiller and started to shiver. Suddenly the door closed. In the house she heard a voice saying this: your doom is near... A lot of rare beasts started to bang the windows and the doors. She was screaming, she was crying and she was asking for help, but she knew that no one couldn't hear her. She felt a cold cuddle, she was paralyzed.

* The words that are underline are the words of the song